Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Trinity Remix]

nice

it does get a little messy in the beginning, but when you threw in the vocals, it started to even out perfectly! great job!

[Alone Theme (Orchestral)]

where's the boom?

you should apologise for the bad spelling rather then use of bad language :P

the song is ok, but for an ochestral piece id expect more epic encounters, or at least a climax or a decent build up :(
that, and the song tends to be a bit empty

its really not bad, i recon

oh yeah, making such statements is not a very effective use of pychology,
being nice to people is a generaly used manipulative method :P
and blammers usually dont read comments or listen to music ;)

good luck with that locking of IP adresses,

SkyPrisoner responds:

Thanks)
About IP - i have shon lock it ^^

[Bridal Creeper]

like my wallet..

hmm its too empty.. it just doesnt feel right
maybe some lead contra melodies would make it more interesting, not just the bassline and the lead

its not that bad anyway :)

(damn the asshole that voted zero on this, i hate blammers)

WritersBlock responds:

I didn't want to make the piece too busy, but I still had a couple of quieter harmonies going on there (the piano and that other synth part that you can hear near the start). As far as song structure goes, I've got a long way to go in working with build ups and climaxes and that sort of thing, but this song's pretty steady, and I would have thought that the emptier parts wouldn't have been too plain...

Thanks for the review. ;D

[*- The Rain Cavern -*]

yeah

well the climax-like parts (.27, 1.10) could use some tension-arousing low tones,
and maybe make the piano return in the climaxes (or use the notes with a different synth or something)

its a nice piece though

Jebbal responds:

They sure could, this was the first orchestral song I ever began working on! Things like that are just non existent!!

There's no piano in this piece, you're thinking of the harp sound :)

Thanks for the review!

[Tree Fitty >;P Experiment 1.0]

not bad

i accually like it, in a weird experimental "influenced by acid" kind of way,
but i find the overall picture still to be too messy, maybe because of the distorted lead sound thougout the number

the ending is the best part of the song, also the cleanest, althought imo its a tad too boring for drum and bass, id place it in a hypnotrance kind of style..

the crossovers need work, they could be smoother, unless its what you intended them to be considering its an experimental song
(this is why i hate reviewing experiments :P)

all in all its not bad at all, just pointing out some flaws, since thats what its here for
youve done a good job :)

id give you a 7.5, but there is no such thing on newgrounds ;P

Pissomatik responds:

Now that's good criticism.

[I'm wondering]

broken

aah the kick kinda breaks the vibe, my funky friend,

Shan83 responds:

well...maybe a bit... ;P
its a innocent mistake ;D
thank you
x

[The Sink Dance]

nice

funky indeed, do you happen to have a longer and a bit more uplifting melody in your collection, for reccomendation?

very nice bassline, and a nice realistic piano^^

good job

Shan83 responds:

thank you, when I made this it was all improvised, and this is why its short ..it was a funky moment :D
but I'm planning to make a longer version by popular demand :P
x

[PooperLooper]

...

ever heard of the word harmony?
thats what it lacks, bigtime

i do like the drums and hats though
youll have to improve on melody and layers

good luck

Pissomatik responds:

Screw harmony!! Yes I have heard of it. To get my real response to this, check out my new submission "Tree Fitty >;P". I was thinking of you when I made it. Be sure to listen to the whole thing, it starts off based on this loop but changes dramatically as it goes on. On the reals, thanx for your honesty, I respect that.

[Rise of a new King]

harrr

woww very epic, id just tweak the synth at the beginning, i find it too boring personnally :D (not holding that against you though)

its just too short, but a hell of a ride indeed

i especially like the transformation the song goes through
thumbs up!

DukeLukeProd responds:

Hmm, what do you mean by synth? the piano? In fact I wanted to add some kind of synth pad to the intro but in the end I've decided to go with real instruments only.
Thanks man!

[Viva La Vida (Techno Version)]

><'

i hate remixes of perfectly good songs

you cant just put a drumkit pumping through a song with a completely different vibe, its just wrong

that and its just nothing interesting or original
:(

Lino responds:

I CAN DO WHATEVER I WANT! >:D