Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Emotion Sequence 1]

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great! very nice indeed i love the violin (or cello im not sure :P), although id throw some reverb in the opening piano synth, and in the breakdown, the song lacks depth, maybe a background chord might help in those 'violin solo bits'

its a very nice song, it sounds kinda cheap though, use some more realistic synths

JohnnyMozart responds:

That is a one definite crutch to my work. Do you have any free programs to suggest? I am on an extremely tight budget and the programs I have are limited. Some of them really lack the realism I'm looking for.

[Plasma (Chainsaw) I'm A Man]

uhu!

its good! the bass overdrive doenst exactly work out with your voice pitch, may want to balance that out (doenst deserve the current score, im kinda sorry for the song :P)

eyelessPrisoner responds:

Bass overdrive?
Me doth not recall putting any bass in this instrumentalz. Or overdriving anything. Your speakers, maybe?

Anyway, thanks for the comment.

[Perfection - Mjattie]

ah..

kinda too bad, this could be so much more! the opening melody is by far the best part, after that it just kinda breaks down..

good job though!

mjattie responds:

ah I think it's a matter of taste

[DreamTrance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]

well

its just a bit too basic. the key in producing a good song is innovation, underlying subliminal scores and rithems, and to keep the song interesting.

in short, its too basic. sure, youve made some nice effects and an acceptable melody, play with it, create different tags and beats

i think you kinda missed the point regarding the essence of trance, or you fully understand yet youre unable to use that knowledge

:D keep working

MZizzlez responds:

Really i was just too lazy to make an interesting chord progression, so that might have something to do with it. Also i made this song in no more than an hour and a half... given more time, i could have improved it. Thx for the review!

[_Dreadnaught_]

djeah

mwa its okay.. it shows some compositional errors, but thats fine since its amateurs work, the only real thing is it lacks structure, it appears to be somewhat random in the eye of a first time listener.
A little more repetition would help

that being said, its still a very impressive composition, with alot of diversity and a display of great talent.

You managed to fuse al those instruments together in an almost flawless score.

good job

[FD-BulletHurrycane]

mwah

its not all bad but the song lacks structure, its practicly build on one riff..
more variation, a decent climax, progression, and an extro.

youve made a good basis for a song though

FragmentedDragon responds:

thanks for the fair review. I'll work on it!

[{PBJ}Chapter 3 B-Type{PBJ}]

ha!

good, but id cut on the feedback, the song sound way to echoey..
that, and sometimes, when the instruments fall together, notes tend to sound off key.

finally, i feel the song lacks a climax.

well, as you might have noticed, im not very familiar with the indie genre, so maybe im saying some stupid things :D

i have not to listened to chapter 3, so i could be missing the spot.

[Frequency Overload]

woot!

damn i like the sinister moodswings :O

fantastic!
this is really nice omg!
it has it all, progression, structure, dynamics, great melodie patterns..
i think that any synth variation would be over the top, although i usually suggest that :P NOT HERE :D

only point of improvement i can think of is to make it sound a bit more professional, play a bit with effects and stuff..

and the dudes voting zero want to get on the top in the individual genres..
and that person has a pretty strong vote too o.o

too bad that not everyone gets an equal chance on newgrounds

SessileNomad responds:

yeah if everyone one NG had equal voting power, there would b no stupid little kids zeroing me

thanks for great review, i know i should have gone more effects on it, as i ussually do, but i wanted to stay all classical on that(excluding drums)

plus i dont understand music theory very well so i suck at writing shit

peace out

[[DJZ] Cheer Up]

happyy

whats that dominating synth you threw in around 30secs? tune down on that one, and its accually not bad,

at least it has structure, but replace that awefull synth with something nicer, and youve got yourself a nice base

then, some progression might help, turn that shit around, throw in a brigde, and play with melodie and variate in synths :D

good luck, hope i helped out

DJ-Zoysa responds:

you did thanks a lot ;D

and yeh this wasn't meant to be a full scale song but i appreciate your input. now that i look back on this song (i made it a year or so ago) i realise that the bass was too overpowering.

thanks a bunch for ur review! :D