Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[/Plastique\]

mmm

nicely done. The chopped sounds (1.46) arent rythmic enough, id reconcider the placing of notes.

thats the only flaw i can notice. Great work.

[Compulsory Desires]

<3 progressive

ill take my time listening to this.

opening, superb.
the expanded melody at.47 sec is a little messy, id try a cleaner sound on that one.
[note afer listning without headset: i take it back, the base works good with the rest of the instrumentals, might wanna keep it in mind though]

good use of percussion.

the synth at 2.03 is my favorite. very nice. I suggest a breakdown at some point, followed by an elaborate house melody with that same synth (although the following saw thingy works kinda good as well.)

breakdown at 4.48 <3, fade in not so smashing. Ending? very nice.

Uluse responds:

whe, that's weird. I listen with headphones myself and I don't hear anything abnormal :S
But what fade-in do you mean with not so smashing? Is it the fade-in of the lead?the bass? or both at the same time?

But anyway, thanks for the elaborate review!

[I LIKE YOUR HAT]

hey, thanks

fuck yeah its a brand new one i have you know :D

very awesome how the right title can make the acual quality of the song obsolete

[Khori) False Logic extended]

wheee

i like it, it has a dry experimental feel to it..
i havent got any real critique, simply because it is what it is. period..

[-=Eye Of Beyond=-]

good good

very nice, almost proffessionally done :) my only slight point of critisism is that the different overlapping melodys in the beginning seem to mismatch, producing a little chaos. (im talking about the synth that kicks in at 1.07-1.08) id go for a little cleaner sound on that one.

for the rest of the song, very good, i especcially like the piano part breakdown and the following build up :D

combatplayer responds:

thanks allot.. ill be looking on that synth^^ thanks for the review :)

[To her <3]

hehe

kinda wrong of you to put a heart in the title and then ask how you feel :P

if its love, no, imo it didnt come out quite right, then again, every experience is different when speaking of love. but its kinda nice :)
a little too much at some parts, (around 2.20 or so) but overall very nice

Wooormy responds:

its mixed feelings here, yeah - youre right... but its up to you guys to making ur own feeling outa this song...
thanks ..

-Wo0rmy-

[Randomness(Hyper Mix)]

yeah

the transitions which you didnt use worked out well :P

i accually like it, it kinda reminds me of 'my own blood on my own fists' and thats a good thing XD

i see this being used in a flash of something but as a stand alone song its not much of a keeper :) good job, especcially on the .25 sec synth i love that one :D

and ofcourse, as goes for most of the songs here, there are some chaotic parts id rather see straigtened out (.55 sec for example)

Sir-Joinz responds:

hehheheh, thanks.
yea, im was aiming for like chaotic violence, but not necessarily gore.
and the up beat tempo with all of the random drum patterns, were use to keep it exciting.
And yea, .25 is like my 3rd favorite one.
And the part at .55 was didn't seem all of that chaotic, unless you mean the rift
to keep it simple, i didn't cut the drum pattern.
Thanks for the review.

[Emotion Sequence v3]

emotions

first of all, it needs more progression, or rather a build-up..

second, the strings and the main melody are basicly the same throughout the song, variation and chords over multiple levels are usually a way of keeping the song interesting.

sounds like beethoven in a way :P
so not too bad i guess

[~Dj Mindstompa - Duckz~]

Enter your summary here

the perc you threw behind the saw, its all wrong. for the good of your song, throw it out :)

id switch to a faster pattern after a small breakdown, and deeply reconsider all percussion placed in the song

Dj187 responds:

the perc? u mean the crash? the hat? the kick? the pad thingy?

[Megid-Concept]

THIS BITES WIND!

hehe kidding ofcourse, its nice, but i miss the bass. I wont base my opinion of this song on the genre you submitted it to, its just a little akward :D

sounds professional though, great overall ballance
your not making it easy to judge though, i hate putting a number on a half finished song..

TheCon-Sept responds:

I am just trying to get my music known. This piece is going to be a Drill n Bass piece. (Different from the original Drum n Bass.) It has much faster beats in it and this song is going to be used in my project. I like submitting my works on here because no one knows me around here.