Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fick It!]

simple

be carefull in your choise of sound, since trance is a genre with mainly repetitive elements, the sound of the loops is the key to a good song

also, when working with fruityloops, be more creative, dont fall back into basic drum and ritmic patterns

i like the song anyhoo, dispite its simpicity and unoriginality
good luck~!

[DST - Wave]

balance is key

I love the bassgit :D

the formost quality of this song is the harmony between the basslead and the mainleads. I also liked the classical elements, you put them in a good context considering most people cant mix electronic and classics

around 2.20 this starts to fade away, because you tend to overrun the electronic elements by creating a classical-element climax, which, in my opinion, kinda puts it out of balance.

other point of critic:
the text and its meaning did not go quite well with the overall vibe of the song itself. its like a random text thrown in at the end.
maybe youd wanna make some repetitive perspectives of the text and use them as a build-up for the climax or something

well anywayz not bad at all,
good luck~!

[boxing theme]

hmm

sounds a bit too happy for a boxing theme if you ask me :P

on the other hand, you didnt ask, so what the hell xd

nice tune, defenitely energetic and solid

Keep it up~!

cacadebaka responds:

thank you mate! next time i'll try a harder song

[UnderStroke]

nice

i love the deep bass intro,, has a slamming inpact!

in general not much to critisize, since its not much of a song :P
would be a sweet build-up for a song though

this could work!

keep it up~!

DavidRx responds:

haha :D thx....
yeah a build-up whas thinking of that

hehe i will x3

[E.I Hardbeat]

not very flowing

it wasnt even that bad, if youd just came up with some decent contradicing melodies, and made it flow over, instead of the shocky whole as it is now, it would be a whole lot better. a bit of originaliy would help as well i guess

cant be too hard i suppose, the basics are present and i apreciate the beat variaton in a way

keep it up~!

Electric-ice responds:

yeah. I was rather to fast finish this stuff up just to be off with it, I am jumping into Hardcore/Gabber style so by that i will Find new alternatives.. since im more kreative with it :P

[Macrochip]

not bad

the beat is great, it has this nice liquid flow (maybe its more like liquid :P)

the vocals however, if you altered them with adobe audition id go easy on the echo chamber effects, they really mess up the clarity of the lyrics.. and otherwise try some filers or something to clear up that reverb

i like the instrumental version better as it is, but if the vocals on this one would improve itll defenitely improve alot

greetz

Gillenium responds:

I did the reverb effect on purpose, through Ableton Live. I tried straight vocals on it and it just sounded weird. I don't have that strong of a lead voice, so I needed something to help me out. It works better than unfiltered vocals, believe me. But hey, that's why I uploaded the instrumental, too. I want everybody to be happy :) Thanks for the review.

[4 AM]

erm

well in my opinion the vocals arent as loud as they should be, the intrumentals seem to dominate the song,..

furthermore, some of the instruments werent what one calls harmonic, meaning that they didnt really fit together. Especially in the beginning the song seems out of pace, thats quite disturbing

well thats it, good luck

HyruleanHyroe responds:

Vocals too quiet: Mixing issue.
Instruments too loud: Mixing issue.
Poor harmonics: Song writing issue.
Out of pace: lack of a metronome.

Getting slammed on NG: Priceless.

Thanks for the review, mate. We've cleaned this one up a bit since recording, so rest assured that it's at least a BIT more harmonic now.

[Beach Theme]

no!

dude the synths need improvement, dont cut them off at the ending of a tone, let it roll smoothly..

the gituar isnt exactly a golden choise,, since it kills the atmosphere you set up with the xylophones in the beginning. It might have some potential, and the main melody is ok i guess..

good luck

[Misterioso pero aventurero]

electric and acoustic dont mix

yet another proof, keep the poles apart, a little conflict is good, but this wasnt a golden combi

for the rest, a bit too simple, and the sudden switch at about a minute could be more subtile.

.48 is an awfull part,

good luck~!

SHINANAKUTA responds:

am i love acustic sorry :s
xD

[Epic String Quintet]

not bad, not good eighter

damnit man, this has potential but needs a crapload of work, how about letting the violins flow through a little more, for a natural glance, and a little exended use of chords..

for starters ofc

this may get somewhere

good luck