Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Another Piano]

argh

Sorry man, its too busy, too simple, try adding some pauses and variating chords.. a decent melody may help aswell

good luck

[Child of Lies]

very energetic

This song is very inspiring, the background melodie (best noticed as intro) does remind me of "the dance of the sugarplum fairy"

my favorite song, yet your craftsmanship turns a seeming innocent melody into an imposing stronghold.
a seemingly simple creation and creating artificial chaos, it brought up a nice ballance

I must say that i didnt really get the anticlimax on the 1.00 breakdown, and the ending could use polishing in my opinion
nonetheless, exellent work!

PS i absolutely love your song "Quest of Eve"
incredibly touching :)

[(DJ Martcore) DnB Loop]

hm.

i dont like the bassfall in the mainstream pause, and the volumeswich of the backgound melodie is quite annoying..
the overall quality is basic at best.

Being new to this first of all doesnt give you extra credit, furthermore the lacking of this song is an overall statement

I dont like it, and its not a technical highlight,,
sorry, better luck next time :)

[DJ Comet-Never]

yea!

Although im more into candytrance, this was pretty sweet :)

the hats came in a litte isolated, which kinda tore the sound into tracks in my opinion, but the scratchsounds did do something for me :D

the beatintro at 2,25 was very good,
i enjoyed the song :)
4/5
8/10

o yea, for the guy who wanted to know how to name a song..
in my opinion every song has a feeling, a vibe that creates a certain feeling towards the listner..
in that view, a songs name is based on the vibes or thoughts behind the song

[Flammable]

wut?!..

it didnt loop so whats the point of 2secs?

nothing special, even for a first time

3/10
1/5
(i actually improved your vote :P)

[<TeK> Omnipresent {Preview}]

hmmm

As you asked, a review on how to improve your song

Youve put in a nice bassline, although it was way too basic, might me a job to work on
The overall melody wasnt bad, but maybe its an idea to throw in somewhat more contradicting aswell as a flinch of dynamics.
Also, the intro is defenitly something you should work on, im not feeling the fade in at all.

I must say i like the introducting pause a few secs afer the fade in, aswell as the melody. it could use some various high pitching, but thats my taste :)

not bad job at all, dont get me wrong. It has its moments, and im simply giving some personal advice ^^

hope i was helpfull
7/10
3/5

TeKNeTiC responds:

Thanks, i'll keep that in mind.

[7th Heaven - [viz]]

not bad

You certainly overdosed the moaning, and the overall tune is catchy but a little simple if you ask me.. I do think that the moan at the ending was in place :)

it wasent bad, but not that good eighter, try to make future songs more complex, that way itll be more interesting and pleasurefull to listen to.

good luck
7/10
3/5

DJ-VIZ responds:

Its suppose to be simple... sometimes simple things are much more pleasurefull than complex songs -- keep that in mind, thanks.

[The Amazing Truth]

truthfully:

I never played supermario, but this song speaks to me in a positive way :)
the melody is very soothing

id keep it like this, because any drastic changes could ruin the song (for me that is:P)

could you give a little explanation on the title? i feel where your going, but i'd like to hear you personal view :)

gamerworld14 responds:

I have no idea why i chose that title name, but it just came to me as i created this song. I think i chose the title because of the soothing melody. I'm still really not too sure...oh well, thanks for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it!

[growing on me]

incredible!

WOW this is probably the best non profesional song ive heard in a long time

good job, no critisism at all :)
it all seems the way you planned it to be :P

great job
10/10
5/5 (my amazing voting power brought you to + 0.00059 XD)

snayk responds:

:D

Thanks for the review! I am incredibly pleased with the way the song turned out. I'm glad you liked it!

[Mastermind 3 Loop (Beta)]

hmmmm

its an absolute killersong, but (it could be just me) it doesnt seem to loop very well..

that was all :)