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[::>|< Electro Clashmatic >|<::]

me likes :)

i like the experimental twist, and the overall vibe is truly magnificent.
the tense and tight electrics really hit me :P

especially the contradicting rithmics at about 3 mins touched me about this song
it does feel unfinished nontheless..
i cant quite put my finger on it, but the song seems just too empy at some times

im sorry for my vague review, i hope it helped a little :)
8/10
4/5

[The Parallel Transformation]

i cant see the parrallel :P

i loved the intro, and the quiet tempo soothes me, but im afraid i cant really see the link with the title you chose
care to explain?

for the rest, might wanna give it a little more kick, heavier bassline and more of a buildup towards that expected climax, afer you warmed us up with that nice intro :)

the high tones are a bit disturbing considering the smooth relaxed vibe.
doesnt really fit

that was all i could think of :D
good luck with future submissions

gamerworld14 responds:

thanks for your response. sorry i haven't answered this recently, but the reason i chose to do the title like this is because i was doing my math homework when i made this song. sort of funny, but true. yeah, sorry, i cannot edit this anymore because i made this in the FL studio demo. I have gotten a lot better, and i am trying to post more stuff soon. hopefully it will someday make the front page.

[p4c-nightlife [unfinished]]

not bad :)

Its not that im absolutely astounished, (excuse my english:P) but its quite pleasurefull to hear. it did kinda fail to keep my interest, but a great subconsious melody :)
maybe a bit more variety, and a litlle more kick, that is, if the song isnt supposed to be a touch melodramatic ^^
7/10
4/5

p4c responds:

hehe ya, if i continue with this ill def. add more variety--just never got to it. whatevs. lul ty for takin a look.

[AuECS/Ersatz- Kiss me I'm 30]

love it

Im all into the experimental music, this was very inspiring :)

might i ask what the idea beneaht this song was?
i wish i could make such wonderfull music, but how simple it sometimes looks (not this one :P) its way hard -.-

very nice, no criticism comes to mind :D

Auecs responds:

basically, My friend and I were trying to work on a collaboration and this is what kinda came out. He worked on some parts and I worked on others. The inspiration probably came from being inside all day when it was too cold to go outside. Pack up the bowl, rip some samples off of some vinyl sitting around and work on it until 6 am the next morning. This was a fun project!

Thanks for your feedback!

[ScratchBeatz1]

huh?

i must say it needs a lot of work :P
cant really review this since its not finished, but it almost seemed kinda loopy to me, but it didnt really loop :D

maybe tell a little more about your intentions with this raw material?

ScratchBatteryMusic responds:

Haha yes very naked as i said in the comments but this is so old I almost disown it as something I made because it never got finished. Maybe ill go back in and fix it up later on. Thanks for the review!

[Space - LDT]

pretty good

Im seriously missing a decent main melody stream, its there, but just too vague and monotone if you ask me.
Furthermore you could have threw in a heavier bassline, but thats my taste, so i wont rip u off on that.. :P
the bpm could have been a bit higher, however i dont know what atmosphere you were trying to achieve, maybe explain a little about that in this or your next song ;)

What you did do very good was keeping the variation up, so it kept my attention. Nothing too extraordinary for the rest of it, but overall a pretty good job :D

keep on working
3/5
8/10

duckson responds:

Thanks for the review!

I realize that this song is light on melody, I was going for more of a Rave-like sound, and most of my songs have heavy melody so I wanted to try something new. As for the bassline, I would like the bassline to be heavier, so Im going to try to get something done about that.

Now, the bpm... My songs (to me anyway) seem to have the tendancy of changing tempo depending on when you listen to them. Thats why I never can seem to establish a tempo, sorry about that.

Thanks alot for the review, I appreciate it.

[Storms of Agony]

"Inspiring"

very interesting beat, much variety, although you seem to have kept the ballance between stagnace and chaos. It really got and kept my attention throughout the song, which is quite a task for the likes of me :P

nice relating and contraversial melodies which keep the atmosphere tense, yet quite comforting at the same time.
You sure do have talent :)

9/10
5/5

Shinrog responds:

Don't be too comforted ;) the storm is coming to you!!!

[Lucovic - Death Memorial]

omg!

wtf sick bassline man,,
mine distorted :P

i like the song, but i dont feel it as being a memorial song..
im not sensing any sadness coming trough, but the song is awesome

Lucovic responds:

Thanx =D

[Groove-Tacular]

its ok

it needs work though, what about speeding up the beginning base a bit, and smoothing out the passage around 2.00

good job though :D

Aresdev responds:

Thanks for the review. This one is dead to me, I used it as a test platform for some new ideas. Of all the ones I'm going back to save, this one isn't making the cut!

[Mr. Looby]

nice!

its defenately missing base, but i love the classical drumsounds you used. It needs some work in general, but i still like it :D

Zump responds:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!