Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Access Red - End of tthe World]

hmmz

id say the hats are way too dominant, and with that the main melody is in the background, yet it should be the other way around

try some remastering

Lighta responds:

That's because it hasn't been mastered.

[Adventure - Medley (Piano)]

very nice

obviously i will not count your age as a factor to rate this piece any higher or lower, and its a wonderfull song indeed :)

id just reverb the tones at some point, where the climax kicks in ^^

Zero123Music responds:

thankyou for not judging.

I left the piece raw. No extra reverb but I should of done

[TrAnSfOrMaTiOn93]

funky brah

i really liked the guitarish jazzy funk :P
the transitions could ve been alot smoohter, its like you just throw in a different melody, and cut the other one off, (and the cheezy fadeouts count as cutting off aswell :P)

nevertheless, i liked the return of the funk at the end, and you made a very nice song indeed :)

beast9368 responds:

Thanks for the review, and i agree i could have done a lot better with the transitions, maybe if i wasn't so lazy? haha

[\\\TAC - [Light] - Fly Away///]

nice

id raise the bpm though :D

[Ahul Tarbuka]

grah

badass kick, close to annoying :P
and the melodies werent exactly soothing eighter

its too chaotic in the beginning, simplify the melodies, it might turn out very nice
i like the bridge at 2.20, the whole song gets better after that part, quite progressive, it doesnt land well when you kill the melodie and appear to start over from scratch, maybe work on some crossings or something

and the ending was shocking, i didnt like it :D

[Evil collab rough idea]

hmm

the synth in the beginning was too dominant, the rest wasnt bad i guess, i like the build-up so far

keep it up, i might turn into a nice song

jrhager84 responds:

Not bad, you guess? It "might" turn into a nice song? LOL Thanks for the "kind" words. At least you left a review, which is a LOT more than I can say for the zero-bombers that just raped my score. The beginning was supposed to be dominant. It's setting the evil tone. I also said in my description that it wasn't mixed, and was rough, so judging it like it's finished wasn't particularly what I was asking for. Either way, your input is appreciated,

-Joel

[XS - Heavens Close]

mwah

it might be more dreamy if the beat was more constant, to create a trancy ambiance. just my opinion though, still nicely done, but the beep at the end was out of place

thatll be all, keep it up~!

[Layered Insanity V2]

shame

the short string you used in the beginning was a bit too chaotic in my opinion, and the the rest wasnt all that outstanding eighter, but ive heard way worse,

good luck in future submissions~!

[War In Paradise]

lots of noise

i think your score up to now is way insufficient, you made a nice song, with lots to hear, it does take some time to develop, but thats okay, unless youre a blammer, which is why your score is so low i guess

i quite like it!