Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(Chzz) Always Remember You]

mmm

like i mentioned before, please dont sing. haha

The vocals are a little faint, maybe want to clarify that a little. The melody is good i suppose, you could throw in a bridge that accually breaks the standing melody, but its good as it is. might wanna cut the ending as well, its a bit long..

that kinda wraps it up, keep in mind to come up with better texts in your upcoming songs. yeah..

giovanni808 responds:

You won't get me from singing :3 Cause I know some people like my voice, and even though maybe only one do, that's enough. But thank you for the review. The melody is kinda repetive, and my microphone isn't the best. It's just a webcam microphone. Only tool I have is Audacity soundcleaner.

[A thought for Newgrounds :3]

ohmygizzle

hahaha you really cant sing dude XD

extra kudos for the last couplet hehe :P

but helas, i agree with the message, although morally i cant give tis an extremely high score :D but you do get extra points hehe

giovanni808 responds:

Oh man this one is intended not to sing good :p Hear Stop up or the one on the front page.

[Future Kiss]

yeah

this one is awesome, great job its a little short for a song though.. If it were a loop of some sort it'd be perfect

[R-VeeBee - Peanuts]

yeah

love the bongos brah. you didnt hit quite the right snare with the melodies. id go for something a little darker, something more raw.. wel nice in general though

R-VeeBee responds:

Thanks! To be honest. I used a loop for the bongos.. I made the rest myself.

Yeah I know what you mean with the darker raw feeling of the melodies. It lacks! Hehe. But I wasn't aiming for it, because I intentionally wanted to go for a more happy feel.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Trance Fuck]

yeah

its accually not bad :)

[Whooptidoo]

not bad

yes, good job, it sounds better. the breakdown is too sudden but its nice in general.

giovanni808 responds:

I am not so experienced in breakdowns :/ In my head it should sound like some reverse beat or something

[Beat Control Vol.2]

smooth.

mm maybe the synths are too simple.. just putting it out there. like the transition around 2.35, but again, the song lacks depth, and could use some more progression, other then variation.

[Wooptidoo]

misc.

yeah, thats about it. anyoo, not too bad of a song i guess, at least its diverse, and its a song :P

i suppose you dont need any support on how to improve, since its just a test? wel let me know, id be glad to redo this in a pm or something.

giovanni808 responds:

I always appreciate good critism, so just pm me :D

[Journey of Man (Pinard)]

good.

plain talent. Normally id critisize this, but im afraid I havent a clue what to point out..

great prelude, i just wanted to give some support.

nathanallenpinard responds:

Thanks. The trumpet (at least with libs now) could be better sounding, but I'm happy with the sound.

[Liguid Flight (Techno)]

agreed.

you got me when the reeverb percussion at .15 came in. but the snare seems to have a nasty white noise to it, i dont know if its intended, but id clean it up anyhoo..
this problem appears with several instruments, im starting to doubt, it could be just me ..

Very mellow beat, very full sound, and masterd very good.
I cant think of any flaws but the above, and ofcourse the demo noise thing.

thumbs up