Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Funky Jam]

G-g-g

g-Great!

could use a little more dynamics i think :D

but great use of piano!
and a great bassline ^^

Shan83 responds:

thank you Rwinius! ;D
well, it's a short funk piece..
but I'm glad you appreciated my piano ;)
x

[*jontyl*-Victory Theme]

bwah

aah the opening harp gets on my nerves, its a-ritmic o.o

well anyhoo, not a very effective title, to begin with..
way to repetitive, and not much attention spent in the deep tone area, that goes for the drumkit aswell..

not that bad anyways, the instrumental variation is present, and you even managed to get a somewhat contradicting melody in there

jontyl responds:

Thanks
Yes, the harp is arhythmic, I did realise, but it was something I put in right at the end

True with the deep tone areas too: maybe I could have used cellos/basoons

Remember, I did this in only two hours

[Just testing]

hmm

cant really call this a song can you?

not to be blamming, but its just 2 synths and some drums :(
its not that bad of a lead melody though

just testing, why would you upload a test?

Bru2712 responds:

1) Yes, it can be called and it is a song.
2) Cause I want people to see my tests and tell me what would be useful and what no.
3) Yup, try to use the kinda drums I use with this trancechorder pattern and lets see what happens.
It's short, but it stills a song, it has not too much drums, what about piano solos? they stills songs.
Let's see... what are you bassed on to this review?, where do you get a song should have big drums and 20 synths?, where can I found that useful guide to make my songs?, I'm glad about how do I compose, I'm just 14 years old man, without preparation or theory, just a FL Studio 8 demo and all I know about MIDI, learned by myself, so dont worry, I'd improve sometime somehow...

[Alone Theme (Orchestral)]

where's the boom?

you should apologise for the bad spelling rather then use of bad language :P

the song is ok, but for an ochestral piece id expect more epic encounters, or at least a climax or a decent build up :(
that, and the song tends to be a bit empty

its really not bad, i recon

oh yeah, making such statements is not a very effective use of pychology,
being nice to people is a generaly used manipulative method :P
and blammers usually dont read comments or listen to music ;)

good luck with that locking of IP adresses,

SkyPrisoner responds:

Thanks)
About IP - i have shon lock it ^^

[Bridal Creeper]

like my wallet..

hmm its too empty.. it just doesnt feel right
maybe some lead contra melodies would make it more interesting, not just the bassline and the lead

its not that bad anyway :)

(damn the asshole that voted zero on this, i hate blammers)

WritersBlock responds:

I didn't want to make the piece too busy, but I still had a couple of quieter harmonies going on there (the piano and that other synth part that you can hear near the start). As far as song structure goes, I've got a long way to go in working with build ups and climaxes and that sort of thing, but this song's pretty steady, and I would have thought that the emptier parts wouldn't have been too plain...

Thanks for the review. ;D

[*- The Rain Cavern -*]

yeah

well the climax-like parts (.27, 1.10) could use some tension-arousing low tones,
and maybe make the piano return in the climaxes (or use the notes with a different synth or something)

its a nice piece though

Jebbal responds:

They sure could, this was the first orchestral song I ever began working on! Things like that are just non existent!!

There's no piano in this piece, you're thinking of the harp sound :)

Thanks for the review!

[Tree Fitty >;P Experiment 1.0]

not bad

i accually like it, in a weird experimental "influenced by acid" kind of way,
but i find the overall picture still to be too messy, maybe because of the distorted lead sound thougout the number

the ending is the best part of the song, also the cleanest, althought imo its a tad too boring for drum and bass, id place it in a hypnotrance kind of style..

the crossovers need work, they could be smoother, unless its what you intended them to be considering its an experimental song
(this is why i hate reviewing experiments :P)

all in all its not bad at all, just pointing out some flaws, since thats what its here for
youve done a good job :)

id give you a 7.5, but there is no such thing on newgrounds ;P

Pissomatik responds:

Now that's good criticism.

[I'm wondering]

broken

aah the kick kinda breaks the vibe, my funky friend,

Shan83 responds:

well...maybe a bit... ;P
its a innocent mistake ;D
thank you
x

[The Sink Dance]

nice

funky indeed, do you happen to have a longer and a bit more uplifting melody in your collection, for reccomendation?

very nice bassline, and a nice realistic piano^^

good job

Shan83 responds:

thank you, when I made this it was all improvised, and this is why its short ..it was a funky moment :D
but I'm planning to make a longer version by popular demand :P
x

[PooperLooper]

...

ever heard of the word harmony?
thats what it lacks, bigtime

i do like the drums and hats though
youll have to improve on melody and layers

good luck

Pissomatik responds:

Screw harmony!! Yes I have heard of it. To get my real response to this, check out my new submission "Tree Fitty >;P". I was thinking of you when I made it. Be sure to listen to the whole thing, it starts off based on this loop but changes dramatically as it goes on. On the reals, thanx for your honesty, I respect that.