Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[R-VeeBee - Peanuts]

yeah

love the bongos brah. you didnt hit quite the right snare with the melodies. id go for something a little darker, something more raw.. wel nice in general though

R-VeeBee responds:

Thanks! To be honest. I used a loop for the bongos.. I made the rest myself.

Yeah I know what you mean with the darker raw feeling of the melodies. It lacks! Hehe. But I wasn't aiming for it, because I intentionally wanted to go for a more happy feel.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Journey of Man (Pinard)]

good.

plain talent. Normally id critisize this, but im afraid I havent a clue what to point out..

great prelude, i just wanted to give some support.

nathanallenpinard responds:

Thanks. The trumpet (at least with libs now) could be better sounding, but I'm happy with the sound.

[Compulsory Desires]

<3 progressive

ill take my time listening to this.

opening, superb.
the expanded melody at.47 sec is a little messy, id try a cleaner sound on that one.
[note afer listning without headset: i take it back, the base works good with the rest of the instrumentals, might wanna keep it in mind though]

good use of percussion.

the synth at 2.03 is my favorite. very nice. I suggest a breakdown at some point, followed by an elaborate house melody with that same synth (although the following saw thingy works kinda good as well.)

breakdown at 4.48 <3, fade in not so smashing. Ending? very nice.

Uluse responds:

whe, that's weird. I listen with headphones myself and I don't hear anything abnormal :S
But what fade-in do you mean with not so smashing? Is it the fade-in of the lead?the bass? or both at the same time?

But anyway, thanks for the elaborate review!

[-=Eye Of Beyond=-]

good good

very nice, almost proffessionally done :) my only slight point of critisism is that the different overlapping melodys in the beginning seem to mismatch, producing a little chaos. (im talking about the synth that kicks in at 1.07-1.08) id go for a little cleaner sound on that one.

for the rest of the song, very good, i especcially like the piano part breakdown and the following build up :D

combatplayer responds:

thanks allot.. ill be looking on that synth^^ thanks for the review :)

[To her <3]

hehe

kinda wrong of you to put a heart in the title and then ask how you feel :P

if its love, no, imo it didnt come out quite right, then again, every experience is different when speaking of love. but its kinda nice :)
a little too much at some parts, (around 2.20 or so) but overall very nice

Wooormy responds:

its mixed feelings here, yeah - youre right... but its up to you guys to making ur own feeling outa this song...
thanks ..

-Wo0rmy-