Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(Chzz) Stop up]

mmmmmm

the vocals are better here. the lyrics are better.
i like the flute, it really adds value here.

the piano is well composed, but id recommend using more instruments instead of a double piano play..

giovanni808 responds:

I am still finding my way of singing. I haven't singed for a long time, and my voice just stopped acting teenagerly. And here I actually made a better text instead of remember you. I like the double piano play :3 There is missing some instruments, but I can't put a finger on which.

[(Chzz) Always Remember You]

mmm

like i mentioned before, please dont sing. haha

The vocals are a little faint, maybe want to clarify that a little. The melody is good i suppose, you could throw in a bridge that accually breaks the standing melody, but its good as it is. might wanna cut the ending as well, its a bit long..

that kinda wraps it up, keep in mind to come up with better texts in your upcoming songs. yeah..

giovanni808 responds:

You won't get me from singing :3 Cause I know some people like my voice, and even though maybe only one do, that's enough. But thank you for the review. The melody is kinda repetive, and my microphone isn't the best. It's just a webcam microphone. Only tool I have is Audacity soundcleaner.

[A thought for Newgrounds :3]

ohmygizzle

hahaha you really cant sing dude XD

extra kudos for the last couplet hehe :P

but helas, i agree with the message, although morally i cant give tis an extremely high score :D but you do get extra points hehe

giovanni808 responds:

Oh man this one is intended not to sing good :p Hear Stop up or the one on the front page.

[R-VeeBee - Peanuts]

yeah

love the bongos brah. you didnt hit quite the right snare with the melodies. id go for something a little darker, something more raw.. wel nice in general though

R-VeeBee responds:

Thanks! To be honest. I used a loop for the bongos.. I made the rest myself.

Yeah I know what you mean with the darker raw feeling of the melodies. It lacks! Hehe. But I wasn't aiming for it, because I intentionally wanted to go for a more happy feel.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Whooptidoo]

not bad

yes, good job, it sounds better. the breakdown is too sudden but its nice in general.

giovanni808 responds:

I am not so experienced in breakdowns :/ In my head it should sound like some reverse beat or something

[Wooptidoo]

misc.

yeah, thats about it. anyoo, not too bad of a song i guess, at least its diverse, and its a song :P

i suppose you dont need any support on how to improve, since its just a test? wel let me know, id be glad to redo this in a pm or something.

giovanni808 responds:

I always appreciate good critism, so just pm me :D

[Journey of Man (Pinard)]

good.

plain talent. Normally id critisize this, but im afraid I havent a clue what to point out..

great prelude, i just wanted to give some support.

nathanallenpinard responds:

Thanks. The trumpet (at least with libs now) could be better sounding, but I'm happy with the sound.

[Compulsory Desires]

<3 progressive

ill take my time listening to this.

opening, superb.
the expanded melody at.47 sec is a little messy, id try a cleaner sound on that one.
[note afer listning without headset: i take it back, the base works good with the rest of the instrumentals, might wanna keep it in mind though]

good use of percussion.

the synth at 2.03 is my favorite. very nice. I suggest a breakdown at some point, followed by an elaborate house melody with that same synth (although the following saw thingy works kinda good as well.)

breakdown at 4.48 <3, fade in not so smashing. Ending? very nice.

Uluse responds:

whe, that's weird. I listen with headphones myself and I don't hear anything abnormal :S
But what fade-in do you mean with not so smashing? Is it the fade-in of the lead?the bass? or both at the same time?

But anyway, thanks for the elaborate review!

[-=Eye Of Beyond=-]

good good

very nice, almost proffessionally done :) my only slight point of critisism is that the different overlapping melodys in the beginning seem to mismatch, producing a little chaos. (im talking about the synth that kicks in at 1.07-1.08) id go for a little cleaner sound on that one.

for the rest of the song, very good, i especcially like the piano part breakdown and the following build up :D

combatplayer responds:

thanks allot.. ill be looking on that synth^^ thanks for the review :)

[To her <3]

hehe

kinda wrong of you to put a heart in the title and then ask how you feel :P

if its love, no, imo it didnt come out quite right, then again, every experience is different when speaking of love. but its kinda nice :)
a little too much at some parts, (around 2.20 or so) but overall very nice

Wooormy responds:

its mixed feelings here, yeah - youre right... but its up to you guys to making ur own feeling outa this song...
thanks ..

-Wo0rmy-