Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Randomness(Hyper Mix)]

yeah

the transitions which you didnt use worked out well :P

i accually like it, it kinda reminds me of 'my own blood on my own fists' and thats a good thing XD

i see this being used in a flash of something but as a stand alone song its not much of a keeper :) good job, especcially on the .25 sec synth i love that one :D

and ofcourse, as goes for most of the songs here, there are some chaotic parts id rather see straigtened out (.55 sec for example)

Sir-Joinz responds:

hehheheh, thanks.
yea, im was aiming for like chaotic violence, but not necessarily gore.
and the up beat tempo with all of the random drum patterns, were use to keep it exciting.
And yea, .25 is like my 3rd favorite one.
And the part at .55 was didn't seem all of that chaotic, unless you mean the rift
to keep it simple, i didn't cut the drum pattern.
Thanks for the review.

[~Dj Mindstompa - Duckz~]

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the perc you threw behind the saw, its all wrong. for the good of your song, throw it out :)

id switch to a faster pattern after a small breakdown, and deeply reconsider all percussion placed in the song

Dj187 responds:

the perc? u mean the crash? the hat? the kick? the pad thingy?

[Megid-Concept]

THIS BITES WIND!

hehe kidding ofcourse, its nice, but i miss the bass. I wont base my opinion of this song on the genre you submitted it to, its just a little akward :D

sounds professional though, great overall ballance
your not making it easy to judge though, i hate putting a number on a half finished song..

TheCon-Sept responds:

I am just trying to get my music known. This piece is going to be a Drill n Bass piece. (Different from the original Drum n Bass.) It has much faster beats in it and this song is going to be used in my project. I like submitting my works on here because no one knows me around here.

[Emotion Sequence 1]

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great! very nice indeed i love the violin (or cello im not sure :P), although id throw some reverb in the opening piano synth, and in the breakdown, the song lacks depth, maybe a background chord might help in those 'violin solo bits'

its a very nice song, it sounds kinda cheap though, use some more realistic synths

JohnnyMozart responds:

That is a one definite crutch to my work. Do you have any free programs to suggest? I am on an extremely tight budget and the programs I have are limited. Some of them really lack the realism I'm looking for.

[Plasma (Chainsaw) I'm A Man]

uhu!

its good! the bass overdrive doenst exactly work out with your voice pitch, may want to balance that out (doenst deserve the current score, im kinda sorry for the song :P)

eyelessPrisoner responds:

Bass overdrive?
Me doth not recall putting any bass in this instrumentalz. Or overdriving anything. Your speakers, maybe?

Anyway, thanks for the comment.

[Perfection - Mjattie]

ah..

kinda too bad, this could be so much more! the opening melody is by far the best part, after that it just kinda breaks down..

good job though!

mjattie responds:

ah I think it's a matter of taste

[DreamTrance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]

well

its just a bit too basic. the key in producing a good song is innovation, underlying subliminal scores and rithems, and to keep the song interesting.

in short, its too basic. sure, youve made some nice effects and an acceptable melody, play with it, create different tags and beats

i think you kinda missed the point regarding the essence of trance, or you fully understand yet youre unable to use that knowledge

:D keep working

MZizzlez responds:

Really i was just too lazy to make an interesting chord progression, so that might have something to do with it. Also i made this song in no more than an hour and a half... given more time, i could have improved it. Thx for the review!

[FD-BulletHurrycane]

mwah

its not all bad but the song lacks structure, its practicly build on one riff..
more variation, a decent climax, progression, and an extro.

youve made a good basis for a song though

FragmentedDragon responds:

thanks for the fair review. I'll work on it!

[Frequency Overload]

woot!

damn i like the sinister moodswings :O

fantastic!
this is really nice omg!
it has it all, progression, structure, dynamics, great melodie patterns..
i think that any synth variation would be over the top, although i usually suggest that :P NOT HERE :D

only point of improvement i can think of is to make it sound a bit more professional, play a bit with effects and stuff..

and the dudes voting zero want to get on the top in the individual genres..
and that person has a pretty strong vote too o.o

too bad that not everyone gets an equal chance on newgrounds

SessileNomad responds:

yeah if everyone one NG had equal voting power, there would b no stupid little kids zeroing me

thanks for great review, i know i should have gone more effects on it, as i ussually do, but i wanted to stay all classical on that(excluding drums)

plus i dont understand music theory very well so i suck at writing shit

peace out