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the vocals are better here. the lyrics are better.
i like the flute, it really adds value here.
the piano is well composed, but id recommend using more instruments instead of a double piano play..
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the vocals are better here. the lyrics are better.
i like the flute, it really adds value here.
the piano is well composed, but id recommend using more instruments instead of a double piano play..
I am still finding my way of singing. I haven't singed for a long time, and my voice just stopped acting teenagerly. And here I actually made a better text instead of remember you. I like the double piano play :3 There is missing some instruments, but I can't put a finger on which.
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like i mentioned before, please dont sing. haha
The vocals are a little faint, maybe want to clarify that a little. The melody is good i suppose, you could throw in a bridge that accually breaks the standing melody, but its good as it is. might wanna cut the ending as well, its a bit long..
that kinda wraps it up, keep in mind to come up with better texts in your upcoming songs. yeah..
You won't get me from singing :3 Cause I know some people like my voice, and even though maybe only one do, that's enough. But thank you for the review. The melody is kinda repetive, and my microphone isn't the best. It's just a webcam microphone. Only tool I have is Audacity soundcleaner.
ohmygizzle
hahaha you really cant sing dude XD
extra kudos for the last couplet hehe :P
but helas, i agree with the message, although morally i cant give tis an extremely high score :D but you do get extra points hehe
Oh man this one is intended not to sing good :p Hear Stop up or the one on the front page.
yeah
love the bongos brah. you didnt hit quite the right snare with the melodies. id go for something a little darker, something more raw.. wel nice in general though
Thanks! To be honest. I used a loop for the bongos.. I made the rest myself.
Yeah I know what you mean with the darker raw feeling of the melodies. It lacks! Hehe. But I wasn't aiming for it, because I intentionally wanted to go for a more happy feel.
Thanks for the feedback!
not bad
yes, good job, it sounds better. the breakdown is too sudden but its nice in general.
I am not so experienced in breakdowns :/ In my head it should sound like some reverse beat or something
misc.
yeah, thats about it. anyoo, not too bad of a song i guess, at least its diverse, and its a song :P
i suppose you dont need any support on how to improve, since its just a test? wel let me know, id be glad to redo this in a pm or something.
I always appreciate good critism, so just pm me :D
good.
plain talent. Normally id critisize this, but im afraid I havent a clue what to point out..
great prelude, i just wanted to give some support.
Thanks. The trumpet (at least with libs now) could be better sounding, but I'm happy with the sound.
<3 progressive
ill take my time listening to this.
opening, superb.
the expanded melody at.47 sec is a little messy, id try a cleaner sound on that one.
[note afer listning without headset: i take it back, the base works good with the rest of the instrumentals, might wanna keep it in mind though]
good use of percussion.
the synth at 2.03 is my favorite. very nice. I suggest a breakdown at some point, followed by an elaborate house melody with that same synth (although the following saw thingy works kinda good as well.)
breakdown at 4.48 <3, fade in not so smashing. Ending? very nice.
whe, that's weird. I listen with headphones myself and I don't hear anything abnormal :S
But what fade-in do you mean with not so smashing? Is it the fade-in of the lead?the bass? or both at the same time?
But anyway, thanks for the elaborate review!
good good
very nice, almost proffessionally done :) my only slight point of critisism is that the different overlapping melodys in the beginning seem to mismatch, producing a little chaos. (im talking about the synth that kicks in at 1.07-1.08) id go for a little cleaner sound on that one.
for the rest of the song, very good, i especcially like the piano part breakdown and the following build up :D
thanks allot.. ill be looking on that synth^^ thanks for the review :)
hehe
kinda wrong of you to put a heart in the title and then ask how you feel :P
if its love, no, imo it didnt come out quite right, then again, every experience is different when speaking of love. but its kinda nice :)
a little too much at some parts, (around 2.20 or so) but overall very nice
its mixed feelings here, yeah - youre right... but its up to you guys to making ur own feeling outa this song...
thanks ..
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