Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ghost Town {dub}]

all over the place!

hey, cant wait to hear more rubadub from ya! youve earned yourself another fan :p

[.:Despair:.]

whoop

this one is good, try truepianos, maybe itll suit you better.. great song!

stefevr responds:

thanks, I'll give it a try ^_^

[Ziende Ben Ik Blind Geworden]

great

you should try duets, like acda en de munnik, it'd go great with the style, but its not that easy to realise

mjattie responds:

xD acda en de munnik

why not? :P

thanks for reaction

[Hidden Deep Within - Piano]

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it sounds very mechanical, you should work with other elements like change of pace, velocity and breakdowns.
one can really hear your inexperience, but its okay, im sure youll get better!

for now, just for the sake of realism, slow it down, you can speed up later in the song. also reconcider the velocity of each individual key and their overal relation..

apart from the simplicity its arranged pretty good..

shadow6nothing9 responds:

Want to help me write a break down? pm me :p

Any ways, did those thigs with the tempo and velocities. kinda though.

Thats the sorta review that helps, thank u.

[[MC] My Last Step]

THIS IS MADNESS!! THIS! IS! [MC] Need a Title

very powerfull and compassionate, like the start of an epic journey..
as for a title id say, 'The day after'

im accually doubting whether you should add percussion or not, it depends on how good you are with percussion scores, i think it could have potential though..

About the mastering of your vst, its worthy of the score! i wouldnt change too much, its really really good as it is!

[{B.A.B.} Obsidian Horror]

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holy shit this is some great stuff! so dynamic, swiching elements, yet so much structure! i love it!

blackattackbitch responds:

Thanks man, I wanted to combine the tritone and the harmonic minor with the augmented 4th as much as possible, since they both fit the theme I was trying to express as much as possible.

Thanks for the review!

[!/Labyrinth of Thought\!]

i wont enter my summarry, rating and review for:

this is great stuff! i really felt myself wandering in a labyrinth of thought :p

great job, relaxing and captivating..

[Fredgy - Eurodancer {Remix}]

this bar is a waste of space..

Its a great song! You could mess around with your percussion range, it was pretty stale.. Besides that and some effects that could be polished, its awesome ^^

great piece of art!

Fredgy responds:

ok i'll see in a next version that could come online! :D
i'll keep it in mind! :p
thank you !

[One Step at a time]

this is a waste of space!

this is really good man, its not worth 250 but its still pretty damn good :p

i really like it! it kinda grows on you after listening a couple of times..

[A Hero's Legend]

does anyone really read the summary anymore?

this is really good, i couldnt possibly be the better when it comes to symphonys.. well, get ready for some mercyless ass-whooping critique!

This song has it all, but one thing; with so many high octaves and the whole tension thing going on, the score lacks depth, with which i mean a 'breakdown' section with a dominant low(er) octave, to balance out all the high notes and fast pacing..

the rest is just.. great! i must admit though that the japanese flute thingy(dont know the name of it) could be edited later in the score without the pitch shift attack to it.. thats a personal thing though, dont mind it, i just felt like pointing it out.

also, the drums/perc patterns are just perfect! it gives this rugged feel without directly resorting to the original classical scoring.

job well done!

merlin responds:

I fiddled with a "bass line" for this song for quite some time... I was hoping the faint timpani drum roll at the beginning, the deep horns, and the bass kick were going to cover it up enough, but you saw right through that!

As far as the japan flute goes, I also sort of debated about that, but opted to keep it a little whiney, I guess to appease to a wider genre of game, if need be. Sort of reminds me of the Cosymo Canyon theme :).

I'm glad you liked my song, I keep asking you to review my work, cause I love your reviews, and respect you and your work as a composer.

Regards,
merlin