Rwinius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fight Theme 3]

K.O.

very good!

id suggest a little more dynamics (exept for the bassline ofcourse, great job there!)
and thats about it :D

keep it up!

[xKore - Speechless]

bring the beat

kinda hypnotrance :D i like it

normally i dont review unless ive got something to critisize, but this is just great!

no real flaws that are worthy of being noticed
good job!

xKore responds:

THUX VERY MUCH THUX

[Rainy Season]

kinda..

kinda too bad, it seems to me you mixed up your instruments, in most cases that turns out to be a bad idea

and its not too bad, a bit repetitive even for a loop, and it doesnt loop at all :P
(i get the point, you can dump the intro making it a full-fledged loop)

well its just nothing special, im not very dissapointed eighter
keep it coming!

[MH16: Fearless]

mixed up

id go for a more classical approach, this is a bit of a wrong combi between electronic repetitiveness and a classical theme/build

but its nice nontheless :D
a point of critisism, the strings drop in too sudden imo, that could be a matter of taste though..

FairSquare responds:

Yeah, i guess you're right.
I made a mistake, because before i was going to make this song, i didn't know what i was going to make.
Thanks for the review!

MH16

[DJ Ku --- Methological]

empty

its a bit too empty imo,
perhapsthe song needs more strings?
try to find some contradicting strings and build up a decent climax!

that, and the drumkit was a bit basic, even for the dance genre

and thats about it, patterns are nice, melodie isnt bad.
overall not a bad job, just pointing out some flaws :D

If you decide to make an improved version please take the trouble to let me know, I would be interested

[--[Espionage]--]

the name is Bond,

the drum crossover could have been more smoother, especially since its a espionage atmosphere..

its really what its supposed to be, good job

[No name #8]

not bad at all

once you get used to the first synth (id decrease the distortion level) its a nice tune. You managed to add structure and an interesting set of instruments

the arps are kind of basic though, but its defenitely not bad

[The Funky Jam]

G-g-g

g-Great!

could use a little more dynamics i think :D

but great use of piano!
and a great bassline ^^

Shan83 responds:

thank you Rwinius! ;D
well, it's a short funk piece..
but I'm glad you appreciated my piano ;)
x

[*jontyl*-Victory Theme]

bwah

aah the opening harp gets on my nerves, its a-ritmic o.o

well anyhoo, not a very effective title, to begin with..
way to repetitive, and not much attention spent in the deep tone area, that goes for the drumkit aswell..

not that bad anyways, the instrumental variation is present, and you even managed to get a somewhat contradicting melody in there

jontyl responds:

Thanks
Yes, the harp is arhythmic, I did realise, but it was something I put in right at the end

True with the deep tone areas too: maybe I could have used cellos/basoons

Remember, I did this in only two hours

[Just testing]

hmm

cant really call this a song can you?

not to be blamming, but its just 2 synths and some drums :(
its not that bad of a lead melody though

just testing, why would you upload a test?

Bru2712 responds:

1) Yes, it can be called and it is a song.
2) Cause I want people to see my tests and tell me what would be useful and what no.
3) Yup, try to use the kinda drums I use with this trancechorder pattern and lets see what happens.
It's short, but it stills a song, it has not too much drums, what about piano solos? they stills songs.
Let's see... what are you bassed on to this review?, where do you get a song should have big drums and 20 synths?, where can I found that useful guide to make my songs?, I'm glad about how do I compose, I'm just 14 years old man, without preparation or theory, just a FL Studio 8 demo and all I know about MIDI, learned by myself, so dont worry, I'd improve sometime somehow...